Friday 16 June 2017
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Hi William,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your book report, I liked how you explained why the zombie wanted to be like humans. Maybe next time you could use punctuation because I couldn't read without taking a breath.
Hi I am Lavenitani, and I'm from Papatoetoe West School. I like the way you said who you recommend this book for.
ReplyDeleteMaybe, next time you could add some more punctuation just like Moni said.